Trinker ([identity profile] trinker.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] rivka 2003-08-10 01:37 pm (UTC)

I think, to be utterly colloquial, that that's a bangup first sentence for your diss.

If you take RJ's suggestion of "towards", my editorial ear wants to make it "toward". I believe that's the more correct subject-verb agreement in this case.

And by the way, "go, you!"

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